Re: new story
Posted by wetjumper on October 18, 2020 at 23:59:27
In Reply to: new story posted by Ty on October 01, 2020 at 17:46:45:
My late but long comments:
The story is beautifully written and the content is intense, perceptive and inspiring! Some parts are clearly written from personal experience and others are powerfully imagined. (Which bits are which? Aha...)
As well as the physical content, I identified with the boys' emotional responses, their anxiety and embarrassment, not knowing what to say or how to say it, wanting to say something but "couldn't even hint at it" - "Both secretly wanted to say something [...] but neither dared." The long moments of silence after trying to say something, wondering if you've got it badly wrong whilst not getting the feedback you need to avoid digging a deeper hole for yourself... I've often been in these situations myself, even to the extent of losing a friend who probably never knew we shared an obscure sensual interest (no, not tight jeans in water) - I only knew for certain after we'd lost contact. (Was he also into getting wet/muddy/messy in clothes? There were a couple of hints - never confirmed. I was still closeted at the time.)
I also identified with Justin and Paul's trepidation over where their shared experience might be leading, their unspoken growing awareness that something powerfully sexual was happening and they were powerless to stop it - and then that it was glorious and momentous, the kind of thing I've called a "landmark experience". "They were excited, embarrassed and scared at the same time." Yes!
It seems to me that Justin and Paul were both trying very hard to hold back from ejaculating... until it eventually became unstoppable. I don't think I could have held back for that long!
I found it slightly jarring that Justin is stated to be 18. He seems younger... or maybe his life so far has been restricted? I'd have said "late teens" without giving a figure, implying Justin is definitely at least 16 (advisable for legal reasons in the UK and some other countries) but he's not necessarily an adult yet (without saying so explicitly).
I gather the story was edited slightly, with a preference for UK usages rather than US ones (not really needed as this site has a worldwide readership and we generally understand one another if we bear that in mind). There was still a "fap". I'm in the UK and until recently I didn't know the word "fap" - similarly many Americans don't know what the British mean by "wank" - but generally the context makes it clear. (These words mean the same, by the way.)
As for me: there've been many times in my life when I've been afraid to reveal my exact feelings or my desire to enjoy wet clothes - much the same as Justin and Paul. Sadly, being habitually solitary as well as inhibited, I've never had the physical experience of grinding against a like-minded partner in tight wet jeans, but I can imagine it... a lot like the story!
The first time I got wet in skintight denim cutoffs without underwear, in rock pools on a beach as the tide was coming in, the sensations turned me on more and more... until I came in my jeans without touching myself at all (nor grinding against anyone or anything). I was on my own. I had just turned 14. I was a rather late developer and had only been producing semen for a few months, it didn't show through the already wet denim. After that I secretly got a lot more pleasure from those cutoffs and from other clothes, mostly in the bathtub, and my interest in wet clothes became a lot more serious... although still secret and solo for many years.
Go on, Ty: will there be a part 2? Did they get caught? If not, how did they avoid it? What did they do next? Many of us would love to read about it!
Stay wet! - Peter (wetjumper)